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Am facut acest subiect pentru ca sunt curios daca pe acest forum exista persoane care scriu, eu unul scriu o carte inj limba engleza, gen fantasy, e dedicata si adultilor si copiilor dar peste 13 ani pentru ca are si ceva violenta daca doriti o sa postez un pic din ea sa va faceti o parere


The Mages of The Ice Crystal
Chapter 1
The Beginning


-“We have to move fast or he will find us!”
-“I know”, spoke Ethos,”but were to hide the Temple is under attack and we are the keepers of the crystal. How would we escape?” Ethos asked Lemilas
But someone was approaching shouting out a cruel laugh.
-“I know you are there” said a spooky voice “If u don’t give me the crystal you will end up like your master who was so foolish trying to stop me, and you cant stand my overwhelming power which I have, and you don’t know what you are meddling with, an ancient power that you don’t know how to use, there fore I say give it to me or you will die!
But from the shadows two voices broke the silence.
-“Then you will have to kill us, if you want the crystal, it’s a power that you can’t use or handle!”
-“How dare u say that to me! How dare you command something to Lord Archon, the master of magic and all that is mystic? I will have the Crystal and you will die for what you said!”
Lord Archon started to say some strange words
-“Elvent menthis carosith!”
From the ceiling came two green circles, which captured Ethos and Lemilas.
-“No! Do something or we will be lost forever!” screamed Ethos.
-“Yes, I know what to do Lemilas, after this run and tell every one that Lord Archon is dead and we have killed him!”
Lord Archon impressed about what Ethos said he replied fast;
-“What, what is this stupidity that u are saying?”
-“You will find out right now”, replied Ethos, he pulled out the Crystal to Archons impression and starts saying strange words which Lord Archon seemed to understand;
-“Are you crazy? You will not do that I will not let you, you will destroy the Crystal and us whit it!”
P.S: mai are ceva greseli :P inca nu e corectata,are 20 de cap si in curand o termin de scris pe calc si o trimit unei bune prietene in S.U.A care are o editura :P