sufletzel de adolescent

Mi-am tot spus "of"-urile pe forumul ADOLESCENTI ("copil filozof" si "16 ani frumosi, dar grei"), dar nu pot sa ma abtzin sa postez si aici (e voie in 2 locuri?), pentru ca e vorba despre... un "mic artist" - ma rog, nu chiar mic (are 16 ani)si nici chiar atat de artist, dar totusi indeajuns de sensibil si de bantuit de trairi intense incat sa scrie poezii.
Ca sa nu ma umflu prea mult in penele mele de mama-closca, as vrea sa aflu si opinii mai obiective in privintza acestui mini-talent.
Si va multumesc anticipat pentru ele.

POEZIE I
When I am worry and forget in myself
I try to be happy and get out of my head
I try to say maybe is better to do what I feel
Not what I think because I am not of steel
Don’t look in past, that’s not good for you
Look in the future and be someone new.
Wish a good change and your problems behind
Cause they aren’t so big, that’s what you’ll find.

I’m not in a cage and the cage is not loked
I just want to be free, cause it changes me a lot.

And when I’m sleeping I’m thinking to you
I don’t know who’s that you but I don’t care, too
I’m thinking so good and I’m letting myself flying
I’m leaving my problems, atleast I’m trying.
Stop being worse feel the way you like
There’s nothing to be worry and that is so kind.
Maybe’s cause I’m young, 16 is my age
But if I get worse I return in my cage.


POEZIE II
Day after day,
Night after night
My heart lives in darkness
So where is the light?

I wish I would think
More positive
It isn’t so hard
That’s what I think

Sometimes I’m crying.
Sometimes I’m happy.
Sometimes I’m worry.
Sometimes I get ugly.

If you’re worry
Look around you
Smile in your own way
You’ll receive a smile, too.

The birds are flying
And the sky is blue
And the sun is shinning
The clowds are a few.

Have an idea
Just phone someone
Speak with a good friend
And your problems are gone.

Be optimist
This is the way
Night after night
And day after day.